The Gun Feed (thegunfeed.com) has a great picture on their website entry page today:
There is nobody so irritating as somebody with less intelligence and more sense than we have. - Don Herold Sometimes the appropriate response to reality is to go insane. - Phillip K. Dick In the fight between you and the world, back the world.- Frank Zappa
Showing posts with label journalism. Show all posts
Showing posts with label journalism. Show all posts
Thursday, May 31, 2018
Wednesday, January 31, 2018
It's The NRA's Fault!
Girl Killed in Kentucky Mass Shooting Handed to NRA as a Sacrifice by Aunt - Slog - The Stranger: The AP reports that Bailey Nicole Holt, a teen shot last week at a high school in a rural Kentucky community, was "the salt of the Earth." Of course, this is total bullshit.[emphasis added]
And of course, that's a fair description of this .... editorial? Opinion Piece?
This may be the most incoherent article by a (supposedly) professional journalist I've ever read.
It's rambling, poorly composed, and follows none of the rules for essay writing as defined in Strunk and White "elements of essay"; point/counterpoint; thesis/antithesis; etc. (I hear that Strunk and White are dead; now I believe it!)
It's not that I necessarily disagree with the author's point; it's just that I'm not quite sure I know what the author was trying to say.
Well ... he thinks "guns are bad"; that much is clear. But it all seems to be an emotionally charged rambling hog-swill of rhetoric. Did I mention "chaotic"?
I appreciate anti-gun essays which make me think; I don't agree with them, but I do grade them.
(Think of the old joke about the woman who said of lecherous advances: "I will not respond to them, but I will grade them!")
This one rates an "F" grade, but only because no lower ranking is available.
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